Daytime slumber

Sky

Grey

Storm-like

Gives feeling

Of night-times dark shroud

Struggling to wake and escape this

Aching pain that such gloomy weather always conveys

A gift unwelcome yet received

Adds weight to eyelids

As they try

To fall

Shut

 

 

I decided to have a go at this format when I read this post;

http://mindlovemisery.wordpress.com/2013/08/17/minimized/

I hope I have followed the format correctly, I would welcome any feedback and comments ๐Ÿ™‚

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