It stands apart

I am trying to get out of my usual rhythms in my poems so here is what i think is a very different style, let me know what you think.

 

It stands

Apart from all others

Such architectural design

Not found in structures around

They line up in rows

Functionality their key

No beauty or style

It stands apart

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