Raindrops poem

Jewels poise mid fall like glass beads from a chandelier

Defying gravity, resisting it with all their strength

These see-through spheres cast out brilliant colours

The jewles grow slowly in size before gravity wins the fight

The raindrop falls to the earth, beauty no longer found in the once glistening sphere.

The beauty is but a moment but leaves a lasting feeling of wonder in my heart.

Let me know what you think.


5 thoughts on “Raindrops poem

    1. Well i’m not very happy with it so been working on it and creating a more structured piece, will put up this new version please let me know what you think! 🙂
      I don’t know which works best. the second i try to convey the pace the feeling of time stood still.

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