Ok i wasn’t happy with my earlier poem and have been working on it to already come up with what i think is a better structured poem. Please let me know what you think, which works best?
Glistening, Jewels poised mid fall
Like beads from a chandelier
Defying gravity’s pull
Resisting, with all their strength
These see-through spheres cast out brilliant light.
Combining together they grow in size
Then gravity wins the fight.
Raindrop once poised, to earth is now bound
Racing head first and blurring in sight
Beauty here no longer found
Glistening, jewels poised mid fall
The beauty is but a moment
The rush of the world returns
Sighing, I move on with life